In case you forgot, Young PAP released a recruitment ad which is almost a copy of ‘Lost Generation’.
I was thinking of trying my hand at writing a copy for an ad using a similar concept. Not sure how to make the video so I’m sharing what I’ve written. Feel free to improve and use it.
It starts today.
Trying to make Singapore better for all races, religions and sexualities,
Will no longer be our weakness.
Our spoiled ignorant comfy life,
We hold dear.
No matter we are a city, country, or little red dot,
Democracy, Justice, Equality are issues,
We will no longer be influenced by.
HDB upgrading benefits is the thing,
Every Singaporean counts.
In about 2 decades time, I will tell my 21 year old son,
His vote does not matter.
Although people will try to convince him,
That the youth can make a difference with their choices.
We know in our hearts,
Singapore is dead.Unless we stop allowing such train of thinking,
Singapore is dead.We know in our hearts,
That the youth can make a difference with their choices.
Although people will try to convince him,
His vote does not matter.
In about 2 decades time, I will tell my 21 year old son,
Every Singaporean counts.
HDB upgrading benefits is the thing,
We will no longer be influenced by.
Democracy, Justice, Equality are issues,
No matter we are a city, country, or little red dot,
We hold dear.
Our spoiled ignorant comfy life,
Will no longer be our weakness.
Trying to make Singapore better for all races, religions and sexualities,
It starts today.

It Starts Today by Ian Timothy is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Singapore License.

Alan Wong | 10-Dec-09 at 11:10 pm | Permalink
We rather that you do not bluff us that the GST increase is to help the poor!
We rather that you not lie to us that it is a subsidy when in fact it is a discount!
We rather that that you does not cheat on us so that you can pay yourselves millions!
Paul @ jobs london | 11-Dec-09 at 12:40 pm | Permalink
It’s good and there is plenty of gravitas in your speech, but it is better if people don’t copy each other and keep it original like you.
The Singapore Daily » Blog Archive » Weekly Roundup: Week 50 | 12-Dec-09 at 11:22 am | Permalink
[...] Blog: The PAP government is illegitimate (My comment to former ISA detainees) – Ian On The Red Dot: A Response To Young Pap’s Recruitment Ad – Singapore Aspirations: On internet security in Singapore – Under the Willow Tree: Singaporean [...]
Gerry | 12-Dec-09 at 12:07 pm | Permalink
Good first attempt. Am developing my own, and timing it for release during the “cooling off day”!!